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wow. did teri really just post art??
idk consider this an early christmas drawing.
it would definitely have looked better with shading, but i just didn't have the time and patience.
this was a really great movie ^^
jack frost is certainly the most attractive animated character since flynn rider.
he doesn't exactly look like jack frost here, maybe a bit older?

Jack Frost (c) Dreamworks
Art (c) moi
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LEAVE A CRITIQUE. I'd really love to hear what you think would use some improvement, plus i'd love you forever if you critique'd
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Love Guardian fan art! You really captured him, despite the simplicity of the piece. You chose nice colors, and everything seems to fit nicely.
Now for the critique:
1. He seems very static. Even his dropped foot is bent forward. He would have to be exerting energy to keep his foot that way, so it seems more natural that his foot would droop downward. This lower foot is also smaller than the one resting on the moon.
2. His jacket and the top of his pants might be over-simplified, making the transition from jacket to pants (around the waist) a little awkward looking. Even a button or something would help.

Overall, I think this is very nice work. The concept is very different from other fan art (for this fandom) that I have seen. Keep up the good work!